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+Document: virtio-v1.0-csprd01
+Number: 5
+Date: Tue, 28 Jan 2014 09:44:50 -0500
+Link to Mail: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/virtio-comment/201401/msg00046.html
+Commenter name: Laura Novich <lnovich@redhat.com>
+Decision:
+
+Proposal:
+
+diff --git a/abstract.tex b/abstract.tex
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+ This document describes the specifications of the “virtio” family of
+ devices. These devices are found in virtual environments, yet by
+ design they are not all that different from physical devices, and this
+-document treats them as such. This allows the guest to use standard
++document treats them as such. This similarity allows the guest to use standard
+ drivers and discovery mechanisms.
+
+ The purpose of virtio and this specification is that virtual
+diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
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+ }
+
+ Efficient: Virtio devices consist of rings of descriptors
+- for input and output, which are neatly separated to avoid cache
++ for both input and output, which are neatly separated to avoid cache
+ effects from both driver and device writing to the same cache
+ lines.
+
+ Standard: Virtio makes no assumptions about the environment in which
+ it operates, beyond supporting the bus attaching the device. Virtio
+ devices are implemented over PCI and other buses, and earlier drafts
+- been implemented on other buses not included in this spec.
++ have been implemented on other buses not included in this specification.
+ \footnote{The Linux implementation further separates the PCI virtio code
+ from the specific virtio drivers: these drivers are shared with
+ the non-PCI implementations (currently lguest and S/390).