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-Document: virtio-v1.0-csprd01
-Number: 1
-Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2014 11:01:44 +0100
-Link to Mail: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/virtio-comment/201401/msg00000.html
-Commenter name: Thomas Huth <thuth@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
-Decision: Agreed at meeting 2014-01-28.
-
-- The first three chapters sometimes uses the pronoun "we" in sentences.
-  I think this should be avoided, since it is not always clear who is
-  meant with this pronoun: The reader? The driver? The device?
-
-- Some of the generic sections still use the term "PCI" though they
-  should not.
-
-I tried to mention the related spots below, but I'd like to suggest to
-scan again the whole document for "we" and "PCI" to be sure to get
-everything right.
-
-Page 8 / Introduction:
-
-- "Extensible: Virtio PCI devices contain feature bits ..."
-  => Remove the "PCI" in above sentence.
-
-Page 10 / Configuration Space:
-
-- "... nor or reads from multiple fields"
-  => that's difficult to parse, is this sentence right?
-
-Page 14 / The Virtqueue Available Ring
-
-- "The available ring refers to what descriptor chains the driver is
-  offering the device"
-  => Somewhat hard to read, maybe better something like this:
-  "The available ring refers to the descriptor chains that the driver
-  is offering to the device" ?
-
-- "The "idx" field indicates where we would put the next descriptor
-  entry in the ring"
-  => "The "idx" field indicates where the driver would put the next
-  descriptor entry in the ring"
-
-Page 16 / Device Initialization:
-
-- "2. Set the ACKNOWLEDGE status bit: we have noticed the device."
-  => "2. The guest OS sets the ACKNOWLEDGE status bit to indicate
-  that it has noticed the device."
-
-- "3. Set the DRIVER status bit: we know how to drive the device."
-  => "3. The driver sets the DRIVER status bit to indicate that
-  it knows how to drive the device"
-
-Page 18 / Notifying the device:
-
-- "... we go ahead and write to the PCI configuration space."
-  => "... the driver can go ahead and write to the configuration space."
-
-- "The avail_event field wraps naturally at 65536 as well, iving the
-  following algorithm ..."
-  => What does "iving" mean? I did not find that in my dictionary.
-
-Page 19:
-
-- "It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts ..."
-  => This sentence is hard to parse ... is there missing something
-  before "finally"?
-
-Proposal:
-
-diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
-index 803615d..8850c1a 100644
---- a/content.tex
-+++ b/content.tex
-@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ Interface' in the section title.
- 
- Configuration space is generally used for rarely-changing or
- initialization-time parameters.  Drivers MUST NOT assume reads from
--fields greater than 32 bits wide are atomic, nor or reads from
-+fields greater than 32 bits wide are atomic, nor reads from
- multiple fields.
- 
- Each transport provides a generation count for the configuration
-@@ -418,11 +418,11 @@ the device MUST ignore the write-only flag (flags\&VRING_DESC_F_WRITE) in the de
- 	};
- \end{lstlisting}
- 
--The available ring refers to what descriptor chains the driver is offering the
-+The driver uses the available ring to offer buffers to the
- device: each ring entry refers to the head of a descriptor chain.  It is only
- written by the driver and read by the device.
- 
--The “idx” field indicates where we would put the next descriptor
-+The “idx” field indicates where the driver would put the next descriptor
- entry in the ring (modulo the queue size). This starts at 0, and increases.
- 
- If the VIRTIO_RING_F_INDIRECT_DESC feature bit is not negotiated, the
-@@ -515,9 +515,9 @@ The driver MUST follow this sequence to initialize a device:
- \begin{enumerate}
- \item Reset the device.
- 
--\item Set the ACKNOWLEDGE status bit: we have noticed the device.
-+\item Set the ACKNOWLEDGE status bit: the guest OS has notice the device.
- 
--\item Set the DRIVER status bit: we know how to drive the device.
-+\item Set the DRIVER status bit: the guest OS knows how to drive the device.
- 
- \item Read device feature bits, and write the subset of feature bits
-    understood by the OS and driver to the device.
-@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ we use a memory barrier here before reading the flags or the
- avail_event field.
- 
- If the VIRTIO_F_RING_EVENT_IDX feature is not negotiated, and if the
--VRING_USED_F_NOTIFY flag is not set, we go ahead and notify the
-+VRING_USED_F_NOTIFY flag is not set, the driver SHOULD notify the
- device.
- 
- If the VIRTIO_F_RING_EVENT_IDX feature is negotiated, we read the
-@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ avail_event field in the available ring structure. If the
- available index crossed_the avail_event field value since the
- last notification, we go ahead and write to the PCI configuration
- space.  The avail_event field wraps naturally at 65536 as well,
--iving the following algorithm for calculating whether a device needs
-+giving the following algorithm for calculating whether a device needs
- notification:
- 
- \begin{lstlisting}
-@@ -705,7 +705,7 @@ notification:
- 
- Once the device has used a buffer (read from or written to it, or
- parts of both, depending on the nature of the virtqueue and the
--device), it sends an interrupt, following an algorithm very
-+device), it SHOULD send an interrupt, following an algorithm very
- similar to the algorithm used for the driver to send the device a
- buffer:
- 
-@@ -732,11 +732,11 @@ buffer:
-   \end{enumerate}
- \end{enumerate}
- 
--For each ring, the driver should then disable interrupts by writing
-+For each ring, the driver MAY then disable interrupts by writing
- VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag in avail structure, if required.
--It can then process used ring entries finally enabling interrupts
--by clearing the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the
--EVENT_IDX field in the available structure.  The driver should then
-+Once it has processed the ring entries, it SHOULD re-enable
-+interrupts by clearing the VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT flag or updating the
-+EVENT_IDX field in the available structure.  The driver SHOULD then
- execute a memory barrier, and then recheck the ring empty
- condition. This is necessary to handle the case where after the
- last check and before enabling interrupts, an interrupt has been