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diff --git a/feedback/5.txt b/feedback/5.txt new file mode 100644 index 0000000..62143f6 --- /dev/null +++ b/feedback/5.txt @@ -0,0 +1,43 @@ +Document: virtio-v1.0-csprd01 +Number: 5 +Date: Tue, 28 Jan 2014 09:44:50 -0500 +Link to Mail: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/virtio-comment/201401/msg00046.html +Commenter name: Laura Novich <lnovich@redhat.com> +Decision: + +Proposal: + +diff --git a/abstract.tex b/abstract.tex +index b42a0b6..186fb81 100644 +--- a/abstract.tex ++++ b/abstract.tex +@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ + This document describes the specifications of the “virtio” family of + devices. These devices are found in virtual environments, yet by + design they are not all that different from physical devices, and this +-document treats them as such. This allows the guest to use standard ++document treats them as such. This similarity allows the guest to use standard + drivers and discovery mechanisms. + + The purpose of virtio and this specification is that virtual +diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex +index 5d57f78..98e1e0d 100644 +--- a/introduction.tex ++++ b/introduction.tex +@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ inter-guest communication) requires copying. + } + + Efficient: Virtio devices consist of rings of descriptors +- for input and output, which are neatly separated to avoid cache ++ for both input and output, which are neatly separated to avoid cache + effects from both driver and device writing to the same cache + lines. + + Standard: Virtio makes no assumptions about the environment in which + it operates, beyond supporting the bus attaching the device. Virtio + devices are implemented over PCI and other buses, and earlier drafts +- been implemented on other buses not included in this spec. ++ have been implemented on other buses not included in this specification. + \footnote{The Linux implementation further separates the PCI virtio code + from the specific virtio drivers: these drivers are shared with + the non-PCI implementations (currently lguest and S/390). |