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authormstsirkin <mstsirkin@0c8fb4dd-22a2-4bb5-bc14-6c75a5f43652>2015-02-15 21:09:53 +0000
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-Document: virtio-v1.0-csprd01
-Number: 5
-Date: Tue, 28 Jan 2014 09:44:50 -0500
-Link to Mail: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/virtio-comment/201401/msg00046.html
-Commenter name: Laura Novich <lnovich@redhat.com>
-Decision: 2014-02-11 minutes: Applied
-
-INTRODUCTION
-===============
-1. Remove The entire first paragraph with the exveption of the first
-sentence.
-2. Replace with - A virtual device in its truest sense is not any different
-from a physical device. The virtual machine sees a virtual device just as a
-physical machine would see a physical one. As such, this document will treat
-virtual devices as physical devices.
-3. The purpose of ...
-4. replace rather than using boutique to rather than using vendor-specific,
-per-environment, or per-OS mechanisms.
-
-5. ADD -The categories described above are further defined as follows:
- Straightforward: Revise last sentence to read - There aren’t any exotic
-page-flipping or COW mechanisms and it functions as a normal device.[1]
-6. Efficient: ADD to input and output (I/O),
-7. effects from both guest and (not sure but i think you should ADD host)
-device writing to the same cache
- lines.
-8. Standard: CHANGE TO READ: Virtio makes no assumptions about the
-environment in which
- it operates, beyond what is required in order to allow the bus to attach
-the host device to the driver on the guest. Virtio
- devices are implemented over PCI and other buses, and earlier drafts that
- have been implemented on other buses not included in this specification.[2]
-
-Proposal:
-
-diff --git a/abstract.tex b/abstract.tex
-index b42a0b6..186fb81 100644
---- a/abstract.tex
-+++ b/abstract.tex
-@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
- This document describes the specifications of the “virtio” family of
- devices. These devices are found in virtual environments, yet by
- design they are not all that different from physical devices, and this
--document treats them as such. This allows the guest to use standard
-+document treats them as such. This similarity allows the guest to use standard
- drivers and discovery mechanisms.
-
- The purpose of virtio and this specification is that virtual
-diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
-index 5d57f78..275ad98 100644
---- a/introduction.tex
-+++ b/introduction.tex
-@@ -13,14 +13,15 @@ inter-guest communication) requires copying.
- }
-
- Efficient: Virtio devices consist of rings of descriptors
-- for input and output, which are neatly separated to avoid cache
-+ for both input and output, which are neatly laid out to avoid cache
- effects from both driver and device writing to the same cache
- lines.
-
- Standard: Virtio makes no assumptions about the environment in which
-- it operates, beyond supporting the bus attaching the device. Virtio
-+ it operates, beyond supporting the bus to which device is attached.
-+ In this specification, virtio
- devices are implemented over PCI and other buses, and earlier drafts
-- been implemented on other buses not included in this spec.
-+ have been implemented on other buses not included here.
- \footnote{The Linux implementation further separates the PCI virtio code
- from the specific virtio drivers: these drivers are shared with
- the non-PCI implementations (currently lguest and S/390).